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Question: Is there a touch of winter about!?
I had a need to touch you,
Your face looked so delicate
As we stood close together
On the porch!.
You looked at me with eyes
That said "Hold me close"!.
I took your face in my hands
And felt a shiver go through
Your body!. You closed your
Eyes and took in a quick breath!.
"Oh my darling" I whispered!.
A tear ran down your cheek
And your eyes opened wide,
And again I felt your body
Move!. "Was there more you
Wanted from me!?" I thought!.
"Oh my dearest darling, are
You happy!?"!.
"No" you replied, as you took
Hold of my wrists and firmly
Pulled away my hands from
Your face!.
"No!?" I said somewhat surprised!.
"No I'm not happy, your bloomin'
Hands are freezing"!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


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I just burst out laughing at the last line! Wonderful poem, Robert!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Great
InterestingWww@QuestionHome@Com

Very well written , thoroughly enjoyedWww@QuestionHome@Com

Well done and great ending to the romance! My only critique would be some meter issues and perhaps some paring of non essential words!. My compliments though!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A warm and whity ending to winter!Www@QuestionHome@Com

At least you didn't put on her backside!.!. I love the punchline to this funny poetic tale of cold hands, warm heart!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com