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Question: A poem of sincere love!?
You are my everything!.
My outer and inner self cries out for you!.
You know my secret places,
You are aware of what my whispers speak!.
If you were to stop speaking,
I would die!.
A soul wrenching withering would overcome me!.
Rendering me incapable of life!.
You fill my emptiness,
Ensuring that we are inseparable!.
I am never alone!.
I thank You for that love with arms to embrace me!.
You have grown a hedge of protection,
All about me!.
I am safe with You!.
You are gentle!.
Even though I am not worthy to be given,
A penny's worth of Your love!.
You have showered me in the priceless stones
Of Your Mercy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
For me this poem speaks to love, and devotion!. It could be in reference to your wife, however I felt that it was speaking to The Most High!.
I too find comfort in his arms!. Thank you!.
TemariWww@QuestionHome@Com
BEAUTIFULWww@QuestionHome@Com
Once again, my friend!.!.!.a lovely thought you've sent!Www@QuestionHome@Com
To me, this is not up to your usual gems, but that is my opinion only!. Things that hit me!. Stanza 1 "outer and inner", perhaps another way to say this!? Line 4 flow could maybe be improved!.
Stanza 2, last line: whose arms are we referring to!?
Stanza 3: hedge of protection seemed odd
Stanza 4 Maybe somewhat cliche "a penny's worth" and I did not get the reference to the priceless stones!? Priceless gifts!?!.
What you do have going is some nice images and obvious emotion and devotion!. She must be lucky to have you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is a wonderful poem about my HUSBAND!!
He IS my rock!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Semper Fi Reborn,
That poem is to love for
it describes the feelings
of good like You are gentle
and bad if I were to stop talking to you!.
In other words it has mixed emotions!.
You are my everything that is so sweet,
describing both inside and outside self which cries for you
The line that says you fill my emptiness
that is you fill in the void
to make me feel whole
as well as special!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Groovy! You are truly one of God's greatest blessings! He gave you this gift of poetry and you use it so well!Www@QuestionHome@Com
hi, this is definetely different than your average love poem & i think it's really beautiful so i give u a 10! bbWww@QuestionHome@Com