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Question: Ten point for who comes closet to the meaning of this!?
Jan!.15!.07 – Sept!.05!.07
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Our lives have inter-twined, yours in turmoil such as mine, tho neither dares to speak of such things!. To bare the thoughts others might share so horrid!. You as I shrink from a need; shared but forsaken!.
I as a rock to shield you from my past filled with shadows of lies and treachery of others, whose lives still but inter-twine mine!. A fear so great it weakens the heart and soul, its only foe a grand rampart built of time, so high and mighty!. A wall built with dignity and forged in the destiny of a lost soul bound in an ever lasting fight!.
The light has been seen but at last can not be realized for until the shadows have long been banished, the way obscured forever is!. A mighty battle must be waged against the shadows of this life, strife with pain and sorrow til all wounds shall mend, nigh til all whose treachery are cast out into the light and seen for who they are!. This battle shall rage for ever more!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
somebody who has shed a past life of drug addiction or involvement in mafia/gangster activities!.!.!.someone who has found a love but is plagued by the consequece of the past,of past association!.!.!.the doom it cast on him still haunts him and his beloved!.!.!.but he resolves never to quit fighting it with goodness until its light overshadows his past deeds amd he could be an ordinary guy againWww@QuestionHome@Com

The battle between good and evil!. The conflict of opposites!.
The lack of communication which builds walls not bridges!. Death is the great equalizer but until life and death are united there will be no peace, no resolution, no dialogue!.Only revolution exists!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think it could possibly be written by someone who is trying to escape from a drug addiction that is hard to overcome because everything in his life has become connected to his addiction in some way and it makes it difficult to break away from what his world has become!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

a person who has had some sort of serious abuse/ addiction and while trying to block out the past sometimes it doesnt sheild enough!. this person is tempted and on the edge of going back whilst unable to show how they feel about their situationWww@QuestionHome@Com