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Question: I wrote this poem!.!.!.do you like it!?
for language i decided to write a sonnet!. first of all, do you like it!? is there anything that would make it bettter!? also i had a bit of trouble with the punctuation!.!.!.please tell me what to change, or if i did it right!.
btw im in 8th grade and i really did lose my father!.
Thank you!.
ALMOST NORMAL
I don’t remember what normal is,
All my sadness I put into disguise;
I cry in my mind and my heart,
But never ever in my eyes;
I pray that no other person
Suffers from missing a father, a dad,
Because I hate this feeling from missing
The wonderful one I had;
Seeing his grave makes me realize
How distant he is from me,
But at the same time I feel
That he is right next to me;
Things are not normal and that’s okay,
Because I know he watches over me everyday!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
That is a great poem!. Your words paint a visual picture of your pain!. Keep on writing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I love your poem!:]Www@QuestionHome@Com
wow that is an amazing poem!.!. it shows alot of emotion!.!. and sorry for ur loss!.!.my dad isnt here either and it brought alot emotion back in me!.!. truly great 2 thumbs up 5 stars :DWww@QuestionHome@Com
That is fantasticccc!
Its so sad:[Www@QuestionHome@Com
That's really really really good!! I almost cried!. Especially for an 8th I am in high school and that's better then any poem my friends could write!. Good job and sorry about your dad!Www@QuestionHome@Com
I cried!. It was great poetry end of discussion!.Www@QuestionHome@Com