Many of you know this one, but not this way. is this better.?

Question: Many of you know this one, but not this way!. is this better!.!?

"black wings"

Hour of reckoning,
judgment is here!.
Close in her arms,
chase day away!.

With your black wings,
remember me!.
She takes my hand,
takes me away!.

Mistress to many,
ring on my hand!.
Engaged forever,
never consumated!.

Dawns ashen sky,
My demon is me!.
Stumbling to solitude,
eternity of decay!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Whoo!

Welcome Back DP!

I really do love your dark stuff my friend, brilliant <3Www@QuestionHome@Com

Back in "BLACK" I enjoyed this!. This Is your best style!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i have read this before and i loved it, but this is a little more polished and refined!. revising is a double edged sword!. of course, a SWORD is found in WORDS and the pen is mighty
either weigh!.!.!.!. lol

i know i am stuck on puns today!. now get ready 'cuz i just posted a poem that i wrote 4 u!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com