What do you think of my piece?

Question: What do you think of my piece!?

[Poet's Block]

[Tedious!.!.!.!.!.Place them one after another]
[Jagged edges seal…!.!.United grow whole]
[The mind's snapshot…!.!.Is only visionary]
[Fumbling fingers…!.!.That guess and turn]
[Are your best bet…!.!.Building on corners]

-swoosh

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I have that trouble Swoosh - my poem with all the lovely words I used to say under my breath when I was a child, was supposed to show the words tumbling onto the page!. Huh, no such luck!.
And I have quite a nice poem about a microlight aeroplane starting as tiny letters, and then each line getting bigger which matches the wording - as if the microlight is getting closer and closer to you!. Can;t post it because I can't do that here!.

Well, my brain is a little tired - it is 7 pm and I've been everywhere, man, and done lots of things!.
When everyone has had a read can you tell me what each line means please!.=) Funnily enough - I still like it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Finicky formatting!.!.!.yep! Name of the game, and it is rather annoying, but apparently we must suffer through!. Despite that!.I am liking it!Www@QuestionHome@Com