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Question: Another poem!. Do you think this is romantic!?
Would you be impressed if someone spoke these words to you!? Where in the world would you want to be!?
Moonless Night
The shades of darkness gather round,
the more menacing as we lose light!.
The winter chill settles down,
to inform the coming night!.
A biter frost, threatens the ground,
with a crystal coat of glistening white!.
A cold shiver runs around,
felt; yet out of sight!.
Hot breath escapes like chimney smoke,
and climbs speedily, but in despair!.
It disappears at a stroke,
as it vanishes into the air!.
The shades of darkness have given way,
to the glitter of a starlit sky!.
A moonless night makes them bright,
not even a cloud goes scudding by!.
Like tiny diamonds of rarest hue,
on a necklace around the heavens!.
Their ability to enchant our hearts,
as a Siren; never ends!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Nothing brilliant, I'm afraid!.
A series of fairly ordinary images held together by unconvincing rhymes!.
A pity, since the first stanza promised much!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
aww nice!.!.!.!. id like to be lying out looking at the stars with my better half hearing that!Www@QuestionHome@Com
afraid not!Www@QuestionHome@Com
that is beautiful!. and it is definitely romantic!. but!.!.!.if someone were to just out of the blue speak that to me like that!.!.!.i would probably be a little shocked!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
No it is not romantic as it is not aimed at an individual and so they would not feel that you value them, but are wonderfully aware of the beauty of your surroundings!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
i like it and i could feel myself standing outside in the frost on a bitter moonless night as i have done many timesWww@QuestionHome@Com
No!. Back to flipping burgers mate!.Www@QuestionHome@Com