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Question: A journey!. Join me!?
My version of latin forms!. I feel the critics readying!
Journey, but know your Heart
Journey not this winding road
with love not true or gait unsure
To pause is fine to refresh anew
for your heart will always know
Journey not this winding road
sorrow grows each mile more
and love flows from souls apart
roads rend lives and take hearts
With love not true or gait unsure
why we still try to appease
is but puzzling more each day
time heals not when hearts feel not
To pause is fine, to refresh anew
for fires of flame do smolder so
and yearns and yens do lessen
when souls grow cold and weary
For your heart will always know
long before your senses feel
and long before comforts cease
Be not afraid!.!.!. change does healWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
The content and message of this poem are excellent!. The meter is a bit bumpy, but you make up for it with the magnificent imagery!. Please do a bit of editing!. A beautiful poem like this deserves to be made perfect!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Surely will join! Very touching, and true!
Best to you!Www@QuestionHome@Com
It's very good and I really like the content!. This is like the Retourne only with one additional stanza and no particular meter!. Very nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This one is otherworldly! Pure genius!Www@QuestionHome@Com
I'm no poet, editor, nor one of enough heart to dare critique!.
Been down that road!. Learned to trust gut!. Gut never lies, heart and head say diametrically opposed opinions!.
Beautiful!. Thank you!.
erm, last line!? Jouney bold!.!.!.change does heal!. Like I said, I'm no poet, ah, how true you write!. Hey, you psy(chotic)ic to read my mind!?
thank you --- and spt for pointing out yet another piece of incredible prose!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is absolutely beautiful!Www@QuestionHome@Com
I needed this poem, thank you!. Nothing more needs to be said!.Www@QuestionHome@Com