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Question: What do you think of this poem!? Blanket for a day!?
A blanket protects me,
At night and when I'm awake!.
When It's wrapped around me,
I feel secure and safe!.

It's with me when,
I'm happy the most!.
Dreaming of plesant things,
That I could easily boast!.
(ps thats not meant sexually! ugh devin haha!.)

It's there to comfort me,
When I'm sad!.
Down to tears and when I'm hurt the most,
Or when I'm trying to be calm, instead of mad!.

Still keeping color,
There hasn't been a change or fade!.
And therefore all I ask,
Is will you be my blanket today!? (:Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
That was awesome!!!!!! = ) If I were to give you any suggestion it would be to take out that ps in the middle of the poem!.!.!.it ruins the mood!~Www@QuestionHome@Com

kinda elementary but it is goodWww@QuestionHome@Com