Ok i wrot w poem....and comments?

Question: Ok i wrot w poem!.!.!.!.and comments!?

here i am thinking of you again
thinking of the day you turned and walked away
thinking of your walk, your talk, your laugh, and your smile
thinking it would last more then a little while
but of course i was wrong,
and now your gone
so are the memories, and now your just a song!.!.!.

i like writing poems but i dont know if im any good!.!.!.!.feedback!?
please be nice im 13Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Yes!.!.!.yes, you are :) keep writing please! You can change just a couple of spelling things!.!.!."then a little while" should be "than a little while" and in the second to the last and the last lines it would be "you're" instead of "your!."
You are so expressive, and your feelings come through with absolute beauty and simplicity!. It made me sad, and it made me smile!.!.!.all at the same time!. ty :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

omg thats beautiful!.!.!.!.!.so sweet!.!.!.keep writing!!! u are greatWww@QuestionHome@Com

omg i didny know u could wirte poems!
and u know i know the wrld know u can do so much better i know its gonna be hard to let go but!.!.!.there are so many nice guys waiting for u out there! (hotter too!) lol i love u sista ur the best!

write a poem about us! lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

Yeah its good!.!.!.!.but how could you feel thatkind of heartache!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

it was really terrible honey :(Www@QuestionHome@Com

girl u are great keep going write me back!Www@QuestionHome@Com

That was beautiful!. It reminds me of my exboyfriend and I!. Keep on writing :]Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think you're a natural at this and you should keep writing!.

A fan!Www@QuestionHome@Com

For a 13 year old this is pretty good!. Remember you're is right here not your!. You are just a song!. Your walk is right!. You need to use punctuation to make it better!. If you like to write poetry I urge you to read, read, read other poets poetry to strengthen your own, see how they're written!. You have some talent, now work with it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com