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Question: Someone help me tweak my funny Clerihew about Simon Cowell !?
Okay, here's the clerihew I made up , its a form or poetry that is supposed to follow the AABB rhyme scheme, is four lines long, is supposed to be funny and about someone famous, and has to have the famous person's name in the first line:

Simon Cowell puts everyone down
American Idol singers wear a frown
He’s quick to be mean, but here’s the thing:
I’d like to see if he can sing

That's mine, but I'd like someone's help tweaking it to make it sound more rhythmic and flowy!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Simon Cowell he puts us down

Makes Idol singers wear a frown

Quick to be mean, but heres the thing

I'd like him better if HE could sing

You write a good poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Simon Cowell is hard on folks
Who's critiques are often turned into jokes
His real intent is to make Idols see
How to become the very best they can be!.!.!.

You're quite welcome!Www@QuestionHome@Com