My Final Days
My last and final days;
Final days of stress,
Of irritation,
Last days of competition;
Of fighting
Final days of being betrayed
Oh My, this is so great
My last and final days until i graduate
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My last and final days; Final days of stress, Of irritation, Last days of competition; Of fighting Final days of being betrayed Oh My, this is so great My last and final days until i graduate how do you like it!?Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: You know what!? I did!. I was thinking what the hell is this about and then it was all explained! Liked, so true!. would love your opinion http://uk!.answers!.yahoo!.com/question/ind!.!.!. Edit: Thankyou for the opinion!Www@QuestionHome@Com Congratulations on your upcoming graduation!. Once small suggestion: "last" and "final" mean the same thing!. I would find another adjective for one of the words to avoid redundancy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |