Please rate from 1-10? a poem?

Question: Please rate from 1-10!? a poem!?

i wish this pain away
away i say
i would love for it to go

go i say go!.!.!.
i hate this pain i feel
in my heart and everywhere

i guess you could say it's broken
the heart has been crushed
into a billion, million pieces

i don't ever seeing this pain leaving
will it ever just leave me!?
i wish it would, so i could be happy again

i wish this pain away
away i say
i would love for it to go

it's not my best but i thinks it's ok
what do you think of it!? if there is something you don't like about it what!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

It's quite moving in its sadness, but if I may venture!.

not the heart is broken but
my heart is broken to keep the
or
this heart is broken!.
also consider a million is smaller than a billion so try saying
a million, billion pieces you might think it works better!.

If that happened to you I'm sorry, but it can be fixed!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

here's something right for you:

Hey I don't know if you got a girl or not,
If you made plans or not
God put me in the plans or not
I'm trippin' this drink got me sayin' a lot
But I know that god put you in front of meWww@QuestionHome@Com

its okay id like to read your better poems though :)
maybe say what caused the pain, how it felt etc make the reader use their heads and emotions to feel what they read!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

How did this pain come!? also maybe try to end it on a more hopeful note; hope that happiness will soon come again, cause it will, don't worry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like, I like! 10!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Your message is loud and clear!.!.
I like it and the others you have written!.!.

!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.10!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

first o f all somone might still your poems dont post them
not the internet

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o0o0o its good (: i'd say!.!.!.8/10
reminds me of Romeo and Juliet 0!.o x3
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I like your emotion in it!.
But I really don't like a lot of your wording!.
That's just my opinion though!.
It's yours and that's what makes it beautiful and that's what matters!.
Nice work:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

IT WAS JUST OK! FOR ME NEED TO KNOW WHERE THE PAIN CAME FROM TO MAKE BETTER OF THE SOURCE!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i really like this one!. awesome!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it but there seems to be repeating and I think it is distracting!. Now with any poem it is your world and you are the painter!. Is the broken heart from Love or a dream that is ended!.Www@QuestionHome@Com