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Question: Last poem for tonite!. I feel great!. Do you like this!.!.!.it is different!.!?
"does it matter"


Does it
matter anyway!?
That we won't get,
what we're searching for!.
We slave through life,
to stay alive,
To get a piece,
of the pie!.
We cannot
reach our goals!.
More we work
the more we earn!.
More we live,
the more we burn!.
Does it
matter anyway!?Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I love the thoughtful, insightful questions posed by this poem!.
I am appreciative of the wonderful poem, quite different from your usual style, and very happy to hear that you feel great!. I agree with you that what we have doesn't matter, it is what we are inside !. Life is a journey and enlightenment comes from compassion, not acquisition!. I believe we should live in the moment as much as possible, enjoying every step of the journey!. Your poem is excellent!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

No, u r right again it doesn't matter!. What matters most is our state of mind and body because if you are healthy and happy you are better for others, too!. And though some people believe that if they had all the things they desire they would be fine- but in times of overabundance the human nature to become dissatisfied takes over (if you don't balance it), just like when times are lean people can commit atrocities due to desperation!.
The counter to dissatisfaction can be won with sacrifice and effort and desperation can dissipate if you realize that suffering IS good for the soul!.!.!. which in time will be all that matters FOREVERWww@QuestionHome@Com

What matters is not the destination, it is the path we travel to get there!. You have set out on a very different road with this poem, and I am enjoying the scenery!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sure it matters as follows!. As Jeff says, the fun is in the journey; more so than the destination!. Well, at least most of the time ;-)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love your poems and "YOU" matter to me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com