Here is a poem. Every line has seven syllables. Do you like it.?

Question: Here is a poem!. Every line has seven syllables!. Do you like it!.!?

"faded roses"

Cannot seem to close my eye
staring at the blood red skies!.

Feeling trapped i cannot rhyme,
am I running out of time!?

Lonely thoughts that pass inside,
Nothings real, it's all disguised!.

I hate the world, can't stand strife,
no more dealing with my life!.

Preperations well advanced,
velvet palls and jasmine masks!.

Cobra's shed at once their skins,
won't someone absolve my sins!.

Free of this my hellish life,
dead and cold, no grieving wife!.

As you know all roses fade,
this is it my last parade!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

this is a masterpeice!.!. actually its beyond even that!!! I'm glad you feel great after getting off the narcotics!! i'm both happy and proud of you!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i love it

it has a great meaning
just ilove it incredibleWww@QuestionHome@Com

yea its aweesome! isnt it a haiku!? anyway did u rite it!? u shud publish it!!! srsly!wow!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i think its really good but u should write poems without the whole only 7 syllables thing if u do ur poems will get much better conitinue writing poetry cuz u r goodWww@QuestionHome@Com

I love it, it's kind of how i feel!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

AWESOME!!! r u a poet or something!?!?!? seriously, i am not joking!.!.!.!.!.!.this poem is really incredible!.!.!.!.it rhymes, and the reader can get lost in the world of the poem!!! its really awesome! is it based on your life!? if it is, i am sorry!.!.!.!.

hey, you know what!?!?!?!? My brother plays X-box 360 live and guess what his gamer tag is!? Dark Prince LOD
What a nice coincidence!!! the LOD stands for lord of death!!! LOL, he has kind of a violent mind!.!.!.heheheWww@QuestionHome@Com

Is the point you want to die!?
It ain't that bad, rhyming guy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yehh i really liked it, i had to write a poem at school with each line of 10 syllables but i found it difficult because i just write how i feel or where i get inspiration from!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Love the last two lines, and the first as well!. It's really good - I like all the imagery! Only criticism - it's 'cobras' not 'cobra's' as it is the plural, not the possesive :] but that's just grammar and doesn't affect the overall beauty of the poem! Good job!Www@QuestionHome@Com

it's amazingWww@QuestionHome@Com

Well, I love it very much!. You are a wonderful poet!. I wrote a few poems,(here are my best in my opinion):

"Raging like the fire,
Where is the rain desired!?
To drown me in sorrow,
Until morning breaks tomorrow!.
Knocking on the door to my home,
Am I left alone!?
Death, left me to mourn,
Sadly, I'm forlorn!.
Sing songs of a sparrow,
hurts my heart like an arrow!.
Morning breaks,
the Earth shakes!.
Now, I am alone!."

Then this one:

Wandering, pondering, throughout the arcives of dreams!.
Reading through numerous volumes of what each one might mean!.
Sadness and happiness is defining each and every thought, of all the battles we have fought!.
People laughing, people crying, picking the roses of life!.
Gently, avoiding the thorns, so we cause no scorn!.
Tiny cracks of sunlight seep through the dark petals!.
Glistening against all the medals, that you won!.
Miracle, or experience!?
The single dark rose in the vase on the table,
bursts into life as so many before!.
So many not capable, but you!?
Yes, you!.
Haven't the experience to regain the lost dark rose,
or, have you!?
You are the gardener, the first step in the new rose's life!.
All the past roses, red!.
Deep,
red!.
Haven't you realized!?
The dark rose treasured so dear,
are all the red roses you hold near!?
Experienced at plucking roses, but lost what you thought the dark rose,
Now, do you have the experience to handle the last dark rose!?

Then here are sites to my other ones:

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But, this is a 10 on my scale!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it because it brought to mind some really beautiful mental pictures!. A poem that feeds the mind!. Very nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Excellent use of meter and rhyme!. Way to go!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think It was well written for something so hard to do!. Good
job!.Oh, NV4L go bite something!. How about your hands so
you can`t write such negative words!. I would say your brain
but you don`t have one!. Dark Prince, "Write On"Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is one of your finest!. You should read some of mine sometime!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i wanted to write something but i am too depressed i can never do anything right not even suicide i can't even write about my feelings anymore i need to end this life but i am too cowardly to do it life is futile and i am worthless good for nothingWww@QuestionHome@Com

I love this!. Though I think the line 'I hate the world' is a little weak/cliched!. It's great for what you feel!. Great job as always!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice flow and couplets did not seem forced!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I AGREE !.!.!.!.ITS HAS ITS PERFECT METER WITHOUT FORCED RHYMES!.!.!.!.THESE COUPLETS FLOW NICELY!.!.!.
GREAT JOBWww@QuestionHome@Com

no its has no depth, but restraining yourself to seven syllables, you inadvertantly forced yourself to write a really bad poem!. dont write poetryWww@QuestionHome@Com