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Question: I have a poem!? Dou you like it!?
Overcome Denial

The wound was always there
but denial delayed the bleeding
And now I have to care
Because I'm losing something I'm needing
Realization swept into my mind
Into the hole I was covering up
It gave me the sorrow I hadn't wanted to find
Now my eyes are an overflowing cup
With the sadness I stored away
And now that this feeling is here
I am afraid it will decide to stayWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
wow!! that is awesome! i can totally feel that!! two thumbs up!Www@QuestionHome@Com

good jobWww@QuestionHome@Com

I LIKE IT! VERY GOOD JOBWww@QuestionHome@Com

i love it its really niceWww@QuestionHome@Com

It's wonderful and very well said!.

Poetry can sometimes be the simplest expression of the soul!. I think you've accomplished that here quite well and it touches the reader accordingly!.

Yes, I like your poem very much!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very good yet so sad!. I hope you feel better!.Www@QuestionHome@Com