Another serious poem?

Question: Another serious poem!?

Nothing!.
Nothing brings me to tears,
Like the Spirit of God moving through my heart!.
Leaving traces of all of you!.
Voices I've never heard,
Faces I've never gazed upon!.

Nothing!.
Nothing can make Him not love us!.
We are His and in Him,
He is ours and dwells in us!.
Clean out the temple!
He comes near!

He gives all,
To we who deserved none!.
We were nothing!.
We are something by His Grace!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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This has merit but in my opinion stanza two does not flow as well!. You still get the star though!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

sounds good to me and very trueWww@QuestionHome@Com

Beautifully and well said as he loves us all no matter who or where we have been !. AmenWww@QuestionHome@Com

I am loathe to critique a poem about God!. But I will!. I love the poem, but it reads just a little choppy!. All I would do is switch a couple of words around to make it move a little smoother!. Other than that is is fine!. Nice job Semper!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'll tell you what: "Nothing brings me to tears, It's EVERYTHING that does!.!.!.!."
My past, my child, my husband and my future!.!.!.!.
I thank God every day, most times the tears come from joy, appreciation and sheer gladness! (Of course worry seeps in)
I'm SO glad to be a part of this experience!
God Bless Semper!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Now that is the true meaning of love, unconditional love!. He may not always like the things His children do, but He still loves us and wants what's best from us!. Now if we just seek heavenly treasures first, we can find out what best He has to offer us, and there are no better treasure than that of God's!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Amen brotha!
Beautifully written and full of truth!.Www@QuestionHome@Com