Rate this poem out of ten?

Question: Rate this poem out of ten!?

The Grey Road
By Morgan Cole

Follow the grey road with
yellow strikes going straight
straight as a ruler
The road with prickly bushes
of blueberries and black berries
The signs make
no sense with the 20 clicks before nude valley
who wants to go there!? A weird person!?
Yes the road that Grey road goes
on and on to the place you want to be!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Don't do this to yourself!. Writers are sensitive people!. If you are going to expose yourself to critique, at least ask for input, not just numbers!. Poetry is the most difficult form of expression, no matter what anyone else tells you!. I will tell you that I get a sense that you are attempting to be deliberately obscure!. There is something very emotional you are trying to convey here!. Write what it is, then close your eyes and see what visual concepts it evokes!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

1!.!.!.sorryWww@QuestionHome@Com

7Www@QuestionHome@Com

4, maybe 5!. Not much for imagery, not much for depth, not much for sense!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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-6Www@QuestionHome@Com

ummm i rate it a 7 :DWww@QuestionHome@Com

10Www@QuestionHome@Com

2 (correct spelling brought the score up)Www@QuestionHome@Com

deep!. love it!
9Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow nice!.!.can you tell its meaning i mean what its pointing to!.!.trying to tell us!? i give it a 9 and a half!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

8 it would of been nicer if it rhymed :)
hope this helped :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Eeep!.!. 1Www@QuestionHome@Com

I rate it a 3 cause it doesnt really 'speak' to me and ai dont really relate to it!. if it relates to you, then u should rate it a higher numberWww@QuestionHome@Com

7
but keep in mind, that poems are a form of art, and there is no universal way of giving it a rating!.!.!.to each his own!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

rubbish 1Www@QuestionHome@Com

mabey a 5Www@QuestionHome@Com

3!.!.!.it doesn't fit together!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is a tough one!.

I get the feeling you were feeling creative, but I don't think you're telling what you feel, or what your take on life is!.

I don't understand this completely, but I do feel that you did well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I don't understand modern poetry, if it doesn't scan and rhyme I DON'T APPRECIATE IT!.Sorry!.!.!.4Www@QuestionHome@Com

uhh!.!.!.a 2!.!.!.I'm not into that scat poetry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

4 maybe 4 1/2!.xWww@QuestionHome@Com

What the heck!? Grey Road is a great idea for a poem, but this is so weirdly written with shallow meaning!. =[ I rate it a 1!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

3!.!.!. i don't get it!.!.!.!. but what does my opinion matter!? lol what do think!? that's what matters!. you have good spirits, talents, grammar, and spelling, which are all very important qualities for poets!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

uhhh!.!.!.a 6 because i think that you can really have some more imagery and detail in this poem!. however, its great so far!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

3!.!.!.!. it didnt catch my attention, i was left not understanding what it was about!.!.!. just a road with bushesWww@QuestionHome@Com

an 8

its got good rythym honey, but you need to get your thoughts a bit more organized or spiced up!.

HEre, rate these:
When I’m around you, my love, I am strong
Passion beatith in my heart forever
Every word you speak, is like a song
A melody we shall sing together!.

When I am cold, you are there to warm me
A burning sensation fills in my heart
Slowly you steal away my love, can you see!?
We’re best friends that will never grow apart!.

How I wish you knew my true love for you
To me, you’re more than just a best friend
When skies are gray, for me you make them blue
I think my love for you will never end!.

You’re a special someone, that’s all I’ll say
You will see how much I love you someday!.
--------------------------------------!.!.!.

1 With all this extra stressin’
The question I wonder is, after thunder quakes, after the earth shakes
Will people loose their homes to the fires of nature!? Through their depression
Nature punishes the people who have not been blessed with a good impression
5 And those, whom are blessed, steal from those who receive no attention
I stress to you my point: Never give up, fight the ones who fail to mention
You can do anything you put your mind to--- even the strong ones need training!.
Enjoy the view from the windows by which you are painting
Love nature the way it is, do not stop the raining
10 The power of the human heart is stronger than steel
There is no reason why people should hide the way they really feel
And when you are starved of a precious meal
And you are made poor once more by those who steal
Let us be there to make a difference, help the hearts that need to heal
15 People are so paranoid; they never believe what is real
They say the truth is crazy; they put it in an envelope to seal
If I was told truth was a lie, I think I would have hurled
But now I am alone all by myself, and now it is just me against the world!.
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He waits for you outside the door
Wondering what blood you have in store!.
Then you come out and he scares you in fright
Then waits no more and begins to bite!.
A trickle of blood hits the floor
So he waits until you begin to pour!.
He collects it as if in a dream
And cautiously you begin to scream!.
He grasps your neck very tight
And once again begins to bite!.
He waits until your very pail
And then you choke, “You’ll go to jail!.”
Then you disappear into the light
As he starts feasting in delight!.
He grabs your heart and eats it whole
Then gets a cup and drinks your soul!.
He slurps your blood up nice and clean
And uses the rest to top his beans!.
Then he eats it up and bites some more
And sucks your blood down to the core!.
Then he looks up and says to the light,
“I thought it would be best to take one more bite!.”Www@QuestionHome@Com

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