Rate my poem 1 to 10 please? constructive criticism!?

Question: Rate my poem 1 to 10 please!? constructive criticism!!?

golden tears of the golden years
your anxious eyes are my demise
the evil in your heart was present from the start
try and try again, i'll never be your friend
you left me to cry without even a goodbye
now the tears, they are flowing
your true colors are showing
a devil inside, hate you can't hide
your blood for the tears i cried year after year
now i am alone , you left me to roam
the memory stays along with the ways
you tortured my heart
it was hell from the startWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Anguish over love unreturned or love spurned, is natural!. You sum up your hurt and pain, but do you choose to linger in it, or do you have the strength to rise above and move past it!?

Your poem is one diminsional!. Reach deep within yourself for forgiveness, and then put your feelings down on paper!. You'll be suprised at how much deeper and retrospective you will become!.

Your poem is good, but shows room for improvement, and growth!. Good luck and God bless!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

omg u need 2 see a shrink -100Www@QuestionHome@Com

What about capitals and punctuation!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

5, its better then the other one, but there is no real substance to it!. It feels flat and you keep stating the same basic idea over and over and over!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it!.!. it shows talent!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love it! You're a very good poet!. =)

[BTW, you know me!.!.!. we worked on the watergate project together!]Www@QuestionHome@Com