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Question: Rate my poem 1 to 10 heads up, this is REALLY LONG!?
a beggar came to the castle
of a not-so-humble king
and with him one request
the beggar did bring

"o mighty king"
cried the beggar
"i have one simple request"
and the king looked upon the beggar
with and expression of detest

"now listen king, for here it is,
my question, hassle free
will you bestow your kindom
upon a man like me!?"

no surely this man is mad
thought the king
a castle for a beggar!?
"It can't be done,simply put,
I'll see to it later

the beggar left disappointed
thinking "was it to big of a request!?"
the kings expression changed though,
it was no longer of detest

the Lord called upon the king
"I tell you this for the good of all,
of every size, great and small
relinquish your kingdom to that beggar
or ell you're kingdom shall fall
the king did not want to leave
all of his power and fame
yet he surrendered his kingdom
without worry or shame

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Yes ! This flows like a river , what a nice piece !. A very high 8/10
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That's great!.
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