Poem - In The Moon When Ponies Shed - Do You Like?

Question: Poem - In The Moon When Ponies Shed - Do You Like!?

In the Moon of the Red Grass Appearing,
when planters ready the earth for new life,
Light Foot rode his agile Appaloosa!.

Determined eyes focused upon the mountains
leaving behind hearts beckoning his name!.
Light Foot and Arabian galloped on!.

Landing amongst splendor and spirituality,
he finds contentment with his lone journey!.
In the Moon When Ponies Shed, she awaits !.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

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I have come for her
by TD Euwaite

Comes a rider strange wandering
Painted pony, skins quite rare
What does he want from us
Why is he talking to my father

All the elders understand him
I can't here the words exchanging
He's a tall and handsome man
A different face from foreign lands

Why are all the women crying
And my mother brings me blankets
Why does he now lead two ponies
Why has he held out his hand

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I like!. Arabian seemed an odd name unless this is more modern day and Light Foot would have read or heard the name!. Yes, I am being picky! Nicely done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow that is really good keep up the good workWww@QuestionHome@Com

The Arabian, perhaps the most beautiful and desired after horse on the market!. No surprise that Light Foot should name him so!. This is a beautiful, succinct poem that sings to the soul!. I can smell the sweat of horse and man as they gallop under the moonlight, the blending of the soul with earth, the becoming one creature amongst splendor and spirituality!. Beautiful, thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, like!.!.!.reminding me (and it's definitely going to be!.!.!.)
"Stands the wigwam of Nakomis!.!.!.daughter of the moon!.!.!."
(Nokomis, if you prefer!.)Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's lovely and very much like a cliffhanger!. Who is she!.!.!.how long has she been waiting!.!.!.etc!. I feel like there should be more!. I can see this becoming a much longer poem like a mini-epic!. I really enjoyed your other poems about "Painted Man and Light foot" as well!. Beautiful poems!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Beautiful and mysterious for those of us who are not familiar with the plains and the mountains!. The last verse leaves the outcome to the reader's imagination--a wonderful device!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love horses!. These are breeds of horses, Appaloosa and
Arabian!. What a beautiful picture you have painted for us!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow what a beautiful poem and picture of your two hero's in the story!.I want to read the book it was so good ,!.,!. Cya Cami!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love it!. Very vivid imagery and made me think Your muse is back!. I am happy for youWww@QuestionHome@Com

Excellent!. Very soulful!. I am there, feeling what you were feeling through your eyes!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I enjoyed this poem and I see Light Foot on his steed!.Www@QuestionHome@Com