Whatz sup yall well ,Just want to know do this poem sounds good!? i mean its only my second one but yeah
When i sit on my roof at nights
Looking into the sky and wonder
I just wonder When will my Sadness ends!?
When will i find the love that i never had!?
Who will save me from this Heartless world!?
I Just Sit back and wonder!.
Only if my timing was right and my mind was ready
I wouldnt have the mistake of rejecting her!.
I Think about the no,s i said,how it had to break her heart!
Wishing i can go back into time to repair this mistakes
I tired to be perfect,
but end up over doing things!.
Tired to win her back!.
But its feels so hopeless!.
Tired to find the answer,
But ends up a mystery!.
I Pray and hope to win her heart again!.
to show her true love!.
To show her how it feels to be with a real man!.
To show her that no matter what happens i will be here!.
When shes down i will be thier to say everything is gonna be ok!.
To prove to her my love is real for her!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com