A poem about hreat break?

Question: A poem about hreat break!?

i wanna cry
cry for all the hreats that have been roken
i wish there was a place to seen them
seen them to get repaired
go this pain would go

this place would be free
and private so noone knows
that you ave been there

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

TRY THIS i'm scared in tears as you walk away leaving me with a fround on my face!.You say hello to another women looking behind your'e ex girlfriend!.I screamed heart broken into my house as he was there waiting for his bags as i threw them back into his sack !.He picked them up and left real happy as i shut the door real snappy!.I was just HEART BROKEN in just an hour before my beautiful BABY SHOWER!. 5/10 FOR TRYINGWww@QuestionHome@Com

I think it is good, and it is very true!. I would say like a 4 or a 5!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i think you should learn some english!.!.!.!.id give it a 2!.!.!.!.and thats just because i like the idea behind your crap grammar and bad spelling!.!.!.!.no offense!.!.!.!.but you suckWww@QuestionHome@Com

Nice!.!.!.!.!.!.5Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sorry to break your broken heart, but since you did not spell check anything, you get a heartbreaking 1!.!.!.=<\Www@QuestionHome@Com