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I have come for her by TD Euwaite Comes a rider strange wandering Painted pony, skins quite rare What does he want from us Why is he talking to my father All the elders understand him I can't here the words exchanging He's a tall and handsome man A different face from foreign lands Why are all the women crying And my mother brings me blankets Why does he now lead two ponies And why has he held out his hand *****Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Beautiful finish and one that she awaited !.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Are you stealing horses or muses!? Nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This is a beautiful sequel to Marguerite's poem!. I applaud you and the gorgeous use of imagery!. Of course, it goes back to a darker time when women were bartered away!. also, yay, a chance to correct a typo, did you mean "here" the words exchanging or actually "hear!?" Just a query!. Loved your beautiful words as always, they stirred my soul!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Yes, it's magnificent!. I have to sit on my hands to prevent myself from explicating it!. It's a word video!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Do not wear that blanket! Do not get on that pony! You have work to do!.!.!.!.later will be time enough to explore the dark lands!.Www@QuestionHome@Com niceWww@QuestionHome@Com I like the poem, but the content and imagery saddens me and not just because it was a way of life for them, but it still is in some places!. My favorite line "Why are all the women crying" In my heart I cry for her and others like her situation!. She was just sold to a stranger like tool or a piece of property!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Very nice !.!.!.!.!.Pale RiderWww@QuestionHome@Com Impressive ! I wish I could put words together like that, and so readily!. Maestro!. ~OM~ SFCUWww@QuestionHome@Com The Earl King!?Www@QuestionHome@Com |