"raindrops"
Help me carry
the raindrops!.
Break me,
tear me down!.
Hold on,
take me to God!.
Drown me,
buried in raindrops!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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Help me carry the raindrops!. Break me, tear me down!. Hold on, take me to God!. Drown me, buried in raindrops!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I love it!.!.!. I am pleased with the direction your new pieces are going!.!.!.short and vivid!.!.!.!.with so much depth!. Yes, this one also is very good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com It's great!Www@QuestionHome@Com It's short and easy to read!.Www@QuestionHome@Com awe thats a nice poem can i have it!? lol just playing, keep writing dont give up okay!.Www@QuestionHome@Com SIMPLE BUT HAS NICE POETIC IMAGES!.THE MEANING IS CLEARLY UNDERSTOOD!.Www@QuestionHome@Com YUP!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This is beautiful!. Raindrops are cleansing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |