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Question: Last poem for the nite!. Is this any good!.!?
"raindrops"


Help me carry
the raindrops!.
Break me,
tear me down!.
Hold on,
take me to God!.
Drown me,
buried in raindrops!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I love it!.!.!.
I am pleased with the direction your new pieces are going!.!.!.short and vivid!.!.!.!.with so much depth!.
Yes, this one also is very good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's great!Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's short and easy to read!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

awe thats a nice poem can i have it!? lol just playing, keep writing dont give up okay!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

SIMPLE BUT HAS NICE POETIC IMAGES!.THE MEANING IS CLEARLY UNDERSTOOD!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

YUP!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is beautiful!. Raindrops are cleansing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com