This is for Vickie, i am sorry. Do you like thispoem.?

Question: This is for Vickie, i am sorry!. Do you like thispoem!.!?

"tragedy"

Vivid colors,
just like others!.
Yet no songs of it's kind!.
The songless bird,
with no destination,
looking for something!.
A tearless tragedy,
I just want to sing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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(its - not it's !)

Yes, I do like this - it is enigmatic which enables you to interpret it in any way you like!. I particularly like the 'songless bird with no destination' - very sad really!.
(much better for me than your dark stuff)Www@QuestionHome@Com

yes, very nice, sadWww@QuestionHome@Com

I am not Vickie but I love this poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

At least don't be sorry for writing this!. It is sweetly elegant and tenderly sad!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Vivid and well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i love this, i'm used to most of your poems being longer, and they are always good, but you did awesome with the short one too, that just shows that you can do well with whatever amount of words you have!. great job!. star for you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It IS tragic but beautifully written with very good imagery, in just a few words!.!.!.
i knew you were capable of breaking free from your
more morose themes!.!.this is sad without being dark!.
well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I hope the bird finds his voice!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com