Hi. Wat do u think of my poem 4 english? do u think it makes sense?

Question: Hi!. Wat do u think of my poem 4 english!? do u think it makes sense!?

Music can be very fun in all styles and ways!. you can listen to a piece of music for many a day!. You can play a piece in baseclef,trebleclef or both!. Legato,stegato low and high when your playing a piece of music time flies by!.

DOES THIS BIT MAKE SENSE!?!? IF IT DOESN'T CAN SOME1 PLZ THINK OF SOMETHING 2 REPLACE IT WID!?!?!?
PLZ!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Hi Em how did your last poem go with the witchy thing!? Your poem is not too bad but a couple of hints, it needs rhythme and you need to look up your dictionary to see what trebleclf and doubleclef actually mean!. See if they fit and decide then!. you can contact me around this time anyday and if you would like to work on it with me I would be happy to!.

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its staccato not stegato

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Pretty catchy, its coolWww@QuestionHome@Com