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YOU
are a very special rose like no other rose
A ROSE
made from pure ice in a garden of flames
A FLAME
glowing with dark wishes through walls of dangerously happy thoughts
A THOUGHT
that with all my existence i want to carry u in my arms
MY ARMS
are hesitating with love and fear as YOU might melt in my handsWww@QuestionHome@Com
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A poem about me sweet!. lolWww@QuestionHome@Com
cool!.reminds me of that poemWww@QuestionHome@Com
it's good but it needs a little more work!.
you used "rose" too much in the first line!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Interesting poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com