depression
feels like emptiness
when you're all alone
surrounded by people
feels like nothing
about no one
nowhere
feels like hate
to everything
you can and can't explain
feels like crying
shedding tears
in solitudeWww@QuestionHome@Com
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feels like emptiness when you're all alone surrounded by people feels like nothing about no one nowhere feels like hate to everything you can and can't explain feels like crying shedding tears in solitudeWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: 10 Wow!Www@QuestionHome@Com 9Www@QuestionHome@Com 10!! That is really good :)Www@QuestionHome@Com maybe a 4!. but that rating might be biased as this seems (to me) sort of bland, short, and unoriginal!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I LOVE THIS PEOM YOUR GOOD 9 KEEP WRITEING!! GOOD JOBWww@QuestionHome@Com |