What do you guys think about this poem! plez! Need opinion.?

Question: What do you guys think about this poem! plez! Need opinion!.!?

Silent nature

I lay on the grass feild!.
looking under the glittery sky!.
the moon awakes the darkness in the woods!.
the wolf howling!.
Owels hooting!.
Bats, soaring through the night sky!.
everything else asleep!.
Quiet as ever!.
My heart beats in a calm pace!.
everything else, silent but me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

This is REALLY good!. A few spelling errors!. But hey, I should know, I go to this site " www!.poetry!.com " and I subbmeted my peom, and I won over 1000000 people and won alot of prizes over 4,000$$ =) SO don't you think I should know!? =-)Www@QuestionHome@Com

There are a few spelling mistakes!. also, I would say "looking up at the glittery sky" instead of "looking under the glittery sky!." Finally, if you're saying the night is silent, mention that the howling wolf and the hooting owl fell asleep or something!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

IT is really good except some spelling mistakes!. But over all great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com