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Question: I need an honest opinion!.!.!.!.!?
do you think this poem isn't good because it wasn't premeditated but written just now!?

you were my daydream
i was without a care
but the evil I've seen
has turned you into my nightmare
your wicked and broken
just like me
but this doesn't need to be spoken
because opposites attract, you see
were two of a kind
evil and grim
both intertwined
through darkness we swim
but you may always be kind
don't give up hope
your not lost my darling
without me you'll cope

if you like it!.!.!.!.dont steal it!.!.!.!.lmaoWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
very good!. and if you wrote that on the spur of the moment, i think you are very talented!. you should look into writing professionally!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i dont get it !.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think its pretty dammm good for spur of the moment!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

great!!! I love it!Www@QuestionHome@Com