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Question: My atheism poem!?
He stood on the pave, watching the smoke,
And rubble that fell from the sky
And he looked to the sky,
That rocky showerhead,
And called out,
Where are you!? Where are you!?
Stop this disaster,
Save thousands of innocents,
From the mental destruction that prowls on their doorstep
Save them!
Save them!
Save them Lord!
But beyond those snowy clouds ever so high,
His voice was absorbed
Forgotten, muted,
For the one who mankind had listened to for millenia,
Wasn't there,
Wasn't listening!.
what do u think!?
[this poem was inspired by the events of 9/11]Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i like it
some details could be tweaked but the over all message was great
there are people out there that lose faith in God because they feel like He betrayed them, or as if He isn't there because if He was He would have saved them
my mother had become an atheist at one point because so many horrible things were happening in her life and she felt she wasn't being helped and that if there was a god he would have helped her
well!.!.!. i love itWww@QuestionHome@Com
My sentiments on religion, exactly!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Interesting!. A little odd, but expresses the point!.Www@QuestionHome@Com