Critique My Poem: Jumpy Jump?

Question: Critique My Poem: Jumpy Jump!?

Penelope, penelope
Jump the rope
Horsey horse jumpy jump
Horsey horse lets have fun
Monkey, monkey jump from tree to tree
Catch a nut and chewy shoo
Ballerina, ballerina jump with style
Have your partner go so wild
Eddy the swimmer jump off the board
Splash the water and have the oh dive
One, two three
One, two three
High, high, high
and
All have great jumpWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Its fine!. It is one those!.!.!.irregular poems!.!.!.but it is nice!. It strikes me that perhaps the author may have been a bit intoxicated when it was written, but other than that, its great!. I can't offer any advice to better it, because it is too!.!.!.!.unique shall I say!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

you got a start but none of the ending words rhyme!. but its stlil good!. not all poems have to rhymeWww@QuestionHome@Com

that is so incredibly gay, lol , I like it thoWww@QuestionHome@Com

fineWww@QuestionHome@Com