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Question: What do you think!?---Eye Tissue!?
Picking up the ashes,
The ashes of infidelity!.
Wiping up tear rashes,
From when you ruined me!.
No need to bother for my arrest,
My heart has already given up!.
You cna't see what's in me for less,
Because my cost is an unpayable preen-up!.
Shell, full of unforgotten memories,
Thoughts; empty, scared, torn!.
Forgotten soul, my only living dignity,
Heart eyed tissue!.
Aches left for rotten,
Camp on me and wash me away!.
My ruins left for your disdain,
Roses turn black,
Graves turn hollow!.
I wish I could turn back,
It's not going to be easy to swallow!.
Gravestones left with a scar dying,
The end of all fears!.
Bury my bones so deep and so far,
I don't want to feel your tears!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I like it!. Why not bring it to the next level!? Make a visual poem out of it!. Grab a camera and record some stuff and upload it to PoetryVisualized!.com!. You can also just record audio and attach a picture or graphics to it!. All up to you!. Be creative!. Once uploaded you can share it with your friends and family and also the online community will rate and give you the feedback you are seeking!. You can also ask follow poets for advise etc!. Just visit PoetryVisualized!.com and you will see what potential this new site has to offer you!. My best, TanselWww@QuestionHome@Com
What about on that line "Within my heart!."Www@QuestionHome@Com
Honestly!.!.!.
I love it! Filled with so much emotion =]Www@QuestionHome@Com