What does this line make you think of?

Question: What does this line make you think of!?

I want to see if this line makes sense to others, I am trying to fit it into a song/poem!.

Many son's are more than a moon away so families are living in the dark!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Great line! I also think of war!. But remove that apostrophe in "son's" because it doesn't belong there!. It's being used as a possessive, and you're not meaning for it to!.

Sad, poignant, beautiful imagery, tragic!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

sounds like warWww@QuestionHome@Com

sun or son!? hmm!.!.!.i think i am trying to go deeper than it is meant to go!.

but if you just mean that sons are far away so families are lonely!.!.then yeah it makes sense!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It makes me think of families being seperated!.

It's great!.Www@QuestionHome@Com