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I wrote a poem and i need another word for opposite, please help!! *****=help here
As the silence falls in like a fog in the morning,
I sit there in quiet and think to myself how the noise,
once to loud and annoing has ceased and is now the quite opposite, ***** of this!.
But how could the noise revers into silence and become something extrememly, entirely new!!?
The noise that had stopped was relaxing to me,
for it sounded like beautiful music in notion!.
But the music has ended, it's over and done,
along with the noise that was once loud and clear and taht was left is the crumbs of this silence in the long, but empty buffet line of noise!.
thx for all the word help w/ my poem!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
antithesisWww@QuestionHome@Com
the other side of this
antipodal, antipodean, antithetical, contradictory, contrary, diametric (those are all synonyms for opposite)
It's nice poem!. If you are thinking of rhyming it, use rhymezone!.com (type in words and it comes up with rhymes) Good luck!
<3Www@QuestionHome@Com
contrary!.!.!.
here are some editing marks!.!.!.
-you spelt 'annoying' wrong
-you need an 'e' after reverse
-you spelt 'extremely' wrong
-!.!.!. and 'what' was left is the crumbs!.!.!.!.
other than the few mistakes you made your poem is looking good!. don't forget a good title!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
The punctuations is a bit spotty, and you've used the wrong 'to'/'too' in places!. There is also an aspect of it that doesn't make sense!. In places it sounds a bit, weird!. But, in terms of the word you cannot find, my only only thought is, reverse!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
polar
antithesis
reflection
mirror side
opposing
rival
is now quite absent the deafening
is now quite lulled the cacophony
(quite the *****)
(I sit here in silence)
(taught has left the crumbs of this silence)
I like your poem very muchWww@QuestionHome@Com
I tweaked!.!.!.a lot!. Never attempted to do so, but was impressed with your offering!. So!.!.!.
As the silence falls as a fog in the morning!.
I sit in quiet contemplation and wonder
How the noise…once too loud, annoying
Has ceased!.
It’s now the opposite!
How could it reverse…
Into silence and become entirely new!?
It was relaxing, sounding like music in motion!.
It’s ended, over and done!
That which is left, is but a crumb of silence!.
Empty buffet of noise!.
(Please forgive my extensive editing!)Www@QuestionHome@Com
I give the poster above me, Bayard Lady an A+!. She did a good job in re-wording your poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Great images and thoughts but garbled in extra words and rhythms awry!. Look at edit by Bayard, it is well done!. When next you pen think about sparseness to enhance your points!. This and you have potential!. Critiques should be viewed as helpful!. If we did not like we would probably not even comment!.Www@QuestionHome@Com