Short poem...comment and critique, please?

Question: Short poem!.!.!.comment and critique, please!?

Of the things I love the most,
that make life worth the while,
None come close to how I feel
each time I see you smile!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I like it!. The simplicity of the language and abcb rhyme scheme worked very well!. There were even traces of scansion which did well to further the flow of the poem!. I especially was grateful for the punctuation!.

Good poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com

a bit cutesy!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Not bad!.

Maybe a little longer on the next one though!.!. Just saying ( I read the longer poems usually!. that's why)
I like it!.
Good work

put it on POETRY!.COMWww@QuestionHome@Com

nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sounds like something off a Hallmark card!.Www@QuestionHome@Com