Poem to ask out girl tell me what it's missing thx alot!?

Question:This is for the one who smiles with joy,
No more corny, just another reason to get me horny,
She's better than things she has fallen into,
They seem like bottomless pits,
Though she's doing alright or so im told,
I think it's just another reason to unfold,
She stares blanklessly into nothing,
Just thinking about something,
A wonderful girl who reminds me of life,
Things that are ment to be left unsaid shall be called even,
I dreamt of you again last night,
It made me think of why it involves you and the rain,
It's because you wash away my head so I have nothing to say,
We didn't need to speak anyway,
We have actions and emotions,
My feelings come alive onto this paper,
One question that I need to know,
Cassandra, will you go out with me?

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: This is for the one who smiles with joy,
No more corny, just another reason to get me horny,
She's better than things she has fallen into,
They seem like bottomless pits,
Though she's doing alright or so im told,
I think it's just another reason to unfold,
She stares blanklessly into nothing,
Just thinking about something,
A wonderful girl who reminds me of life,
Things that are ment to be left unsaid shall be called even,
I dreamt of you again last night,
It made me think of why it involves you and the rain,
It's because you wash away my head so I have nothing to say,
We didn't need to speak anyway,
We have actions and emotions,
My feelings come alive onto this paper,
One question that I need to know,
Cassandra, will you go out with me?

Yeah, I agree, I think the horny part leaves much to be desired....but the rest is sweet and to the point. I think she'll like it.

you ruined it when you said the horney part