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Position:Home>Poetry> A short morning poem - Is the meter okay?Question:"A Short Morning Poem" Yes, today’s another day Admittedly I spout clichè But that’s what happens when I’m giddy As I arrived at work in the City When I walked into my office this morn’ A book sat on my chair Wrapped in a brown mailer, soon forlorn Until I laid its cover bare There it was, What a Tangled Web (Oh) Published in 2008 My copy, hand-signed, by TD & Co. You guys and gals are really great! Woohoo! Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: "A Short Morning Poem" Yes, today’s another day Admittedly I spout clichè But that’s what happens when I’m giddy As I arrived at work in the City When I walked into my office this morn’ A book sat on my chair Wrapped in a brown mailer, soon forlorn Until I laid its cover bare There it was, What a Tangled Web (Oh) Published in 2008 My copy, hand-signed, by TD & Co. You guys and gals are really great! Woohoo! What a treat tonight will be When you can sit across from she... "Oh, look Dear...my poems...in a book!" Woohoo! A published poet! Congratulations, I remember the thrill too, finding the book on my doorstep. Your meter is fine, by the way. And I loved your work in the book, oh so very scintillating. love the meter, very controlled. good content to. Just great all around thanks for writing it Yup, perfecto. I felt the same way when I received the book. I enjoy your poems. Fairy tales do come true do you mind uploading a pix or two for posterity? We would surely thank TD will pay the tab! Oh cool! You ordered the book. The meter is fine. No charge. WooHoo!! Meter? It is ok, i just put a quarter in it. we got an hour left. Lovely Rita Meta maid nothing can come between us... Give us a wink...luv It made my day, too. Such an exciting feeling to see one's poetry and picture in "Oh What A Tangled Web." Now, on to 2009. Champagne and Roses all around!!! I enjoyed reading your work. I have three copies of the book, to give out to friends! Woohoo! Blah Blah Blah words are cold slaw in your glistening maw Your gob is a run with the lowest of pun I could shoot myself dead if I had me a gun Loved it, Keep up the good work! (ps, I know its 'cole slaw') Your meter has nearly expired. You need to put some loose change in....but I share your joy...being published is the best! Your question happened yesterday As I thought I'd shoot myself. Then I drove got my mail And put the gun back on the shelf. |