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Question:This is what i have so far, Red, Yellow, orange and brown
the Autumn leaves are falling down..... Please give me ideas for the ending of it


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the Autumn leaves are falling down..... Please give me ideas for the ending of it

Red, yellow, orange and brown,
The Autumn leaves are falling down.
From branches bare the leaves are shed;
They fall down softly on my head.

you should have done as the summer sun fades away the autumn leaves come down to lay! :) but, you should do your own homework next time. Report It


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  • Try to think outside the box here... what do you associate with autumn? Is there a memory or a story linked to it for you? Try talking about the autumn leaves in the context of whatever story or memory you think of. That makes a more powerful emotion.

    It's getting colder every day,
    This poem sounds really Gay.
    Jk.
    What I meant to say,
    The winter weather's on it's way.

    =] 1st + 5th Line I was serious about. I was kidding about the others =D

    falling,falling
    i wish (insert season) would come and quit stalling

    Wherever I look theres colour all around,
    All over our beautiful ground
    Soon autumn will be gone
    but please don't you mourn,
    and also don't be forlorn
    as the earth orbits the sun
    Next year there'll be another one.

    this is just something i through together, so it isn't good but it will give you at least 1 idea... I hope. plus it has no story line or an ending. Oh well.

    creatures eating every bit just to sleep in a pit
    the days are getting smaller the moon getting taller
    chlorophyll leaving leaves "spring come quickly....please"
    colors flying here and there making branches oh so bare
    frost is coming so I'm poeming.