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Position:Home>Poetry> Extra Credit Poem.. Suggestions?Question:No Lives I am afride, that she will not like me, on a "ride". I have a smile, she would be happier. I am wearing a mask. Heart so white, no light that shine upon. .It. Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: No Lives I am afride, that she will not like me, on a "ride". I have a smile, she would be happier. I am wearing a mask. Heart so white, no light that shine upon. .It. The first stanza could be different...otherwise I think it's pretty cool, especially the last part. :) How about this for the first stanza: What I won't know won't hurt me. Still I wonder if she will like me. Just a suggestion, but I hope you like it. Peace out, cub scout. Well, is it yours? It needs a little grammatical help. Like I'm really the one to say something about that, but I see it afterwards. It needs to have a little more something to it to make some sense sorry about that. It's not bad though. |