Blue Rose Poem?

Question:So beautiful as i stare at the eyes
of a tragic lie that kissed my soul
You left there addicted to your essence
Your gorgous face
brought me a place
I thought i could call home
as you left me there
I wondered where to go.
I close my eyes i see your smile
so decieving; you were,
Yet i still want you there.
How can i be so foolish
to lust over ur eyes?
you left me here
I feel so weak
you sucked all my youth away
and yet my heart beats for your return
Loved the loveless!
touched by hatred,
you left from my sight
but i still see your condradicting soul
Why can't this feeling go
i know you dont want me home
yet i cant help but this want
and its staining me whole

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: So beautiful as i stare at the eyes
of a tragic lie that kissed my soul
You left there addicted to your essence
Your gorgous face
brought me a place
I thought i could call home
as you left me there
I wondered where to go.
I close my eyes i see your smile
so decieving; you were,
Yet i still want you there.
How can i be so foolish
to lust over ur eyes?
you left me here
I feel so weak
you sucked all my youth away
and yet my heart beats for your return
Loved the loveless!
touched by hatred,
you left from my sight
but i still see your condradicting soul
Why can't this feeling go
i know you dont want me home
yet i cant help but this want
and its staining me whole

wow...i love this! it's amazing! am i the only one that isnt a top contributer? lol i love it really! i would say more but i really have to go! gomen asai!

Rose, I love this! =]
Very good.

I like it Rose! You really have an act for poems =) Keep up the good work.

Amazing!
I've recently started to writing poetry, but I see I've got some catching up to do.
=]

wow rose...I just got goose bumps when i read that. Very touching I loved it.