Just wrote this not ten minutes ago?

Question:I have said so much to you over the years but not what I have wanted to say. I am so afraid to say what I want to say that I fear I will never say it I fear that it needs to be said but I never say it because I am afraid for you. I am afraid for me. I am afraid of you I am afraid of me, I am afraid of what will happen to you if I say this I am afraid of what I will be called if I say this. But I need to say it because it is not something that I know but something I feel. Something I feel in my heart every time I see you and in this kind of situation my heart can be smarter than my brain. Oh beautiful girl it’s OK to be afraid of hat I want to say I am afraid too I am the most afraid. I am firing a gun and instead of you getting hit with the bullet you have to watch me dive in front of you and take the bullet that I have just fired. This is not just any bullet it is a bullet made of my emotions my own emotions will kill me.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I have said so much to you over the years but not what I have wanted to say. I am so afraid to say what I want to say that I fear I will never say it I fear that it needs to be said but I never say it because I am afraid for you. I am afraid for me. I am afraid of you I am afraid of me, I am afraid of what will happen to you if I say this I am afraid of what I will be called if I say this. But I need to say it because it is not something that I know but something I feel. Something I feel in my heart every time I see you and in this kind of situation my heart can be smarter than my brain. Oh beautiful girl it’s OK to be afraid of hat I want to say I am afraid too I am the most afraid. I am firing a gun and instead of you getting hit with the bullet you have to watch me dive in front of you and take the bullet that I have just fired. This is not just any bullet it is a bullet made of my emotions my own emotions will kill me.

wnderful peice of writing! I really like the imagry and the emotion implied ito each and everyword. I really really loved it! your have a talent with writing and don't let anyone tell you differently! hear me?! lol I am not that strict about it but don't let peoples words put you down about your writing. I again really liked and think it was extremly well done! nice job keep it up! I want to read more if you ever want to send it to me! nice job again!

eh. mediocre. sorry.

for what purpose

oh my goodness i can total relate to that I'm one that has a hard time saying what i mean and how i feel and that's one thing that makes me the shy person that i am but you are talented don't stop write more at least for me

dude, nice job, but it could use more of a rythem.