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Question:There is no use
in my tries for the truth
all i'l get is lies
this world wont acsept you
just rumors. stories, and allibies
i hear them talking
and want to believe
but i know that their all out to decieve
they think wrong is right
and right is wrong
if your not like them
then you dont belong
and no ones above
trieing you ruin your life
shape you and change you
ignoring your strife

Its not really done...any suggestions?


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: There is no use
in my tries for the truth
all i'l get is lies
this world wont acsept you
just rumors. stories, and allibies
i hear them talking
and want to believe
but i know that their all out to decieve
they think wrong is right
and right is wrong
if your not like them
then you dont belong
and no ones above
trieing you ruin your life
shape you and change you
ignoring your strife

Its not really done...any suggestions?

Not bad at all. Good topic.

There is no use
in seeking the truth
When all one gains is lies.
This world won't accept you-
Only rumors and alibis.
I can hear them talking
And I want to believe
but I know that they're all
Only out to deceive.
They think wrong is right;
And they think right is wrong-
And if you're not like them,
Then you don't belong.
There's no one above
Trying to you ruin your life,
Shape you and change you,
Ignoring your strife.


Although all the way up til alibis (or however you spell that blasted word) needs some revising so it will flow better.