A short poem i wrote, is it good?

Question:i know i have to change the ending and make it longer, so can y'all help me. and please tell me if its any good. and im only 15 so dont give me that crap about not quiting my day time job or something like that.
thanks!

living in a lie
a self created life
its so hard hiding who I am
when no one is willing to asept who I was
changing my self seems to ease the pain
but I will always be the person I use to be
im lost and confused
in a false life with no solid ground
willing to give up who I am for who I will be
but it seems that no matter what I keep going back
this time I give up
I need to figure it out
I need to find my self

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: i know i have to change the ending and make it longer, so can y'all help me. and please tell me if its any good. and im only 15 so dont give me that crap about not quiting my day time job or something like that.
thanks!

living in a lie
a self created life
its so hard hiding who I am
when no one is willing to asept who I was
changing my self seems to ease the pain
but I will always be the person I use to be
im lost and confused
in a false life with no solid ground
willing to give up who I am for who I will be
but it seems that no matter what I keep going back
this time I give up
I need to figure it out
I need to find my self

I think it's great because you seem to have put a lot of feeling into it. Just make sure you use proper punctuation and spelling before you finish it...that's really important.

it's not that bad..
are you emo??

I love it! check spelling and stuff. =)

mmmmmm...
it's good...
but it makes me think a lot...

yes,its good.

its good
excellent job

good.......... leave the ending as it is............. should use spell check.

It's Great. When it makes the people who read it stop and think, I mean thats what poetry is suppose to do isn't it.

You did a great job and you put a lot of feeling and emotions into it.

Please write more.