Is this a good 4 line poem?

Question:I'm creative, talented, intelligent and many things unspoken
too stubborn to settle so giving up is a safe that will never be opened
for me there is no braking point, because I can't be broken
I'm successful in my own eyes and no one else's are open
By KiyaZ

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I'm creative, talented, intelligent and many things unspoken
too stubborn to settle so giving up is a safe that will never be opened
for me there is no braking point, because I can't be broken
I'm successful in my own eyes and no one else's are open
By KiyaZ

Oh yes!
Well done!
It feels like the first two lines need a bit more work because they don't quite scan (don't sound quite right when recited). Maybe " a safe that won't be opened "? That chops two syllables off the line and would make the first couplet sound better.
Really good, I've felt this way

good..

Eh? No. Don't be so self-centered in poetry and don't tell us, show us. I could come up with something better faster than it took me to write this response.
"Good luck with your illusion of superiority"

it could tottaly be a song! i could actualy see someone like ashlee simpson or just a rockish female singer! its really good!

i like it, love your name btw

my eyes are squinting