Poem: Unknown Family?

Question:"Unknown Family"

Who are they?
Do they hear, do they feel me?
Can i be reached, so they can see

What's wrong with them?
Are they okay?
Da__mn i just wanna BREAKAWAY

Why do I feel like this when they are around?
Like i've been missing but not yet been found.
Tell me.....

Do I really belong with these people of what they call a "family"
I'm just saying, I wanna be happy
One out of four children of this "family" which is me
I believe that people won't let me be

Just leave me alone, let me be free
Please, please give me a break
I'm feeling too much heartache

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: "Unknown Family"

Who are they?
Do they hear, do they feel me?
Can i be reached, so they can see

What's wrong with them?
Are they okay?
Da__mn i just wanna BREAKAWAY

Why do I feel like this when they are around?
Like i've been missing but not yet been found.
Tell me.....

Do I really belong with these people of what they call a "family"
I'm just saying, I wanna be happy
One out of four children of this "family" which is me
I believe that people won't let me be

Just leave me alone, let me be free
Please, please give me a break
I'm feeling too much heartache

it was really good, i know how it feels im 1 of 4 and im the oldest but i still feel lost among the group and then a headache when they all need something. I say 2 thumbs up.
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you're good..
i like your writin style cuz i can relate,..

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