Hey, do you like my poem?

Question:"Stronger"

I have to be that stronger person
Not being the ground that people walk on
But, making a difference in myself
To try to change the world and everyone else
This poor world that's getting smaller and smaller
Because the war and toher things that occur
I have to stand and so does this homeland
I'm on my mission
To make this world come up w/ a better decision

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: "Stronger"

I have to be that stronger person
Not being the ground that people walk on
But, making a difference in myself
To try to change the world and everyone else
This poor world that's getting smaller and smaller
Because the war and toher things that occur
I have to stand and so does this homeland
I'm on my mission
To make this world come up w/ a better decision

Not a high level vocabulary and don't use "w/" in poetry, spell it out. also you have a typo in line 6 toher - other. It is slightly boring, you could elaborate it and don't stress yourself to rhyme it you can probably make that into a better poem if it was free-versed. I don't like it that much. sorry.

nice thought, good rythem, but you should add a few crisp rhymes in. last two lines could use some work. good though, i like it.

It's great, I love it.

Lovely. Publish it at poetry.com

grammatically it doesn't have to work out because "poetic license" but it makes it better if the words and ideas flow well