Comment! my poem?(I think it's pretty good, but not good enough.)?

Question:I try to love,
but then I love too much,
it gets around too quikly,
my loved little bunch.

I'm not sure it's love,
all I can do is tell them,
but then when I speak the truth,
there not even my friend.

I get so lonely,
from time to time,
getting through my life,
one step at a time.

but when it comes,
to that very last day,
all my love,
goes a stray.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I try to love,
but then I love too much,
it gets around too quikly,
my loved little bunch.

I'm not sure it's love,
all I can do is tell them,
but then when I speak the truth,
there not even my friend.

I get so lonely,
from time to time,
getting through my life,
one step at a time.

but when it comes,
to that very last day,
all my love,
goes a stray.

I think it's good. I'd give it a 7. But it's not about whether people think you're good at writing poetry it's about expressing yourself and letting out your emotions. If you did that in your poem I'd give it a 10.

its actually really good.
its not quite my style.
but good.

but nothing is everybodys style that poes gotta mean something 2 you.