A poem of Senses, tell me what you think?

Question:Blackness, what I see.
Pain, what I feel.
Fear, what I taste.
Dread, what I smell.
Sadness, what I hear.
Senses tell the story.
What more do you need?

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Blackness, what I see.
Pain, what I feel.
Fear, what I taste.
Dread, what I smell.
Sadness, what I hear.
Senses tell the story.
What more do you need?

very true my friend....
"my poetry, it screams in anguish. my poetry, it cries in desolation...my poetry tells the stoyr of me..."
~~~Deadly Poetry

Ok, you've stated some examples, is the poem coming soon????

I like the rythem but why couldn't it be any longer? Is there a story to it? If so could you post it?

I require no more. You have said it.

you have said it all